Friday, November 28, 2008

DESI POEM On GOD!!!

OH GOD...

the Creator of All...

the protector of All..

You dwell high...

Up above the sky...

Helping the One u see...

Not Just ur Devotee...

For All, I Pray....

Oh GOD, Teri JAI!!!!

2 comments:

PrIyAnKa said...

ah.. here it comes.. your first poem.. and it is a tribute to the almighty...
That tells me how much you trust and believe the heavens above..
Well your poem was short and sweet. It has all the masalas, the rules and regulations of poems namely - rhyming words, beautiful expression,
its mesmerizing and a great way to start...
It reflects your positive energy and gives positive vibes to others.. I am so happy for you and waiting for the next one.. :)

Gokul said...

Thanks a lot Dear... I'm surprised as to How u didn't find faults in my Poem! That was too much Generosity! :)